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                                        The Vampire and his Servant
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As I fall on the withered ground,
I stare up at the darkening sky,
Tears pouring from my pleading eyes.
I want to be free from this hell…

Light footsteps sound, stepping toward me.
I turn my head, slowly, the fear sending chills down my spine…
Making my heart cold.

He walks towards me, his graceful legs carrying him closer.
His long black hair whips against his pale face
As a sudden wind makes contact with his slender body

As he reaches me, he kneels down in front of my crumbled body.
I flinch visibly and turn my head away,
trying not to meet his piercing, tormenting gaze…
He reaches a slender hand towards my face and brushes the hair from my eyes.

He asks me what I am doing out this late at night.
I keep my eyes averted and am silent.
A smile plays on his perfect, beautiful lips and he leans toward me.
I close my eyes and shudder as I feel his lips brush against my neck, gently…

I can feel his cold breath on my shaking skin.
I swallow as the ground parts from my body,
As he lifts me into his arms.
I try to pull away, But he grips me tightly…

His voice, that sounds of an angel’s,
Speaks to me, softly…
“Why do you run from me?…” I hear him ask, my head against his cold chest.
There is a chilling wind that blows past us, whipping his hair around me.
I shiver and he holds me tighter.

He puts me gently on the ground and wipes the remaining tears from my face.
He smiles his angel’s smile and puts his hand across my face.
I am frozen in a mix of emotions.
Wanting to run…
Wanting to hide from this creature that holds me so gently in his arms…

Yet…
I don’t…
I want to stay with him…
I want him to keep holding me in his cold arms…

I am a slave to this vampire…
I am a slave to this man that most humans call a monster.

Yes…

I am a slave to this vampire…
:icontaro-tora:
THERE ARE MANY PARTS TO THIS POEM SERIES, SO BE SURE TO READ THEM ALL!!! >_<

THIS IS AN UPDATED VERSION OF THE SAME POEM THAT I SUBMITTED A FEW DAYS AGO. ^_^ THERE WERE SOME MISTAKES IN IT, SO I FIXED THEM AND RESUBMITTED IT.


This is a poem I wrote about a vampire and his... um... servant... thing... ^^;;
...Yes, they are both guys...

Tell me what you think about the poem. I would like to hear feedback from you all. ^_^

I'm kind of into Gothic Poetry right now, so I tried to make a little Gothic poem, but I think I failed... ^^;;

Oh well... I like the visuals that it gives me. ^_^


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3rd Part- [link]
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~bro0017 Dec 5, 2011  Student Digital Artist
OMG!!! LOVE IT!!!
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:iconsecret-h:
I'm sorry, I do not want to seem like a jerk or like I am bitching, but wouldnt a "Vampire and his Slave" be a more accurate/appropriate title? No offence.
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:iconmiry-chan78:
This is sad but really beautiful too.
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Mood: Love ~KehXKeova Dec 29, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
This is AWESOME!!!
Yay for boy love!!!! :D
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~YourClosetNinja Sep 30, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
oohhh!!!!! i like it!!! it sent chills down my spine! it really pulled me in! i can't wait to read the rest!^^

-goes off to read more-
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Mood: Approval !Deadly-X-Nightshade May 25, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
That was a great start, very vivid and detailed.
I am a major fan of Vampires, so I will read the other parts following this one.
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:icondeedee200:
I love this! It's very good, especially how the man is torn on whether to run or stay. And it's sexy too - now i have to read the rest of them! :love:
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*Taro-Tora Apr 30, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! ^_^ What did you think of the other ones???
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:iconshadow968:
crazy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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